Thursday, January 10, 2013

where were u last night

       1:Where were you last night? 
                     3: Where were we?
          2:  Where do i even begin? 
     1: Where were you last night? 
          2:  Explore your imagination. 
                 3: Take a chance in adventure.
      1:  Where were you last night?
                     3: Lost in time....
         2: Or lost in paradise. 
                    3: Lost in happiness.
          2: Lost in the voices among the crowd.
                   3: Just completely lost. 
       1: Where were you last night?
                    3: Breaking down every inch of the sky. 
             2: Finding the beauty of a white wall 
                    3: Breaking down to the bone, finding deepest and powerful meaning of life.
             2: Finding the innocence in the ocean
     1: Where were you last night?
               2: Wonderland
                      3: Euphoria 
               2: The moon, didn't you see me?
                      3: The sun, why didn't you look for me? 
     1: Where were you last night? 
                 2: Vanished
                         3: Apart from reality.  
                 2: Where were you last night? 

2 comments:

  1. i really like how the repetition of "where were you last night" is answered in new and creative ways. I do have to say that the numbers before the lines are a little confusing...i think they're a symbol of different people talking but i don't know. i would definetily change that if i were you.

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  2. There are so many interesting descriptions in here. I especially like "Finding the innocence in the ocean". Water does have a certain type of unique purity to it. "The moon, didn't you see me? The sun, why didn't you look for me?" has a romantic feel to it. "Finding the beauty of a white wall" I'm sure many interior designers would dispute this could ever happen, but it stands out to me. I'm sure all of us would love to feel as happy as these words describe. It really matches your blog's title. This is really great.

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